Thanks so much for the great notes. Very helpful and I agree with all the criticisms and you gave excellent ideas on how to fix them.
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You have a very amicable approach that makes swallowing all those bitter truths about things to fix so much easier. Your suggestions are the first that have really provided a light at the end of the tunnel.
He is someone I trust to give me honest feedback. Any time I have implemented his suggestions, it has improved my work so far beyond what I’d first imagined. Most importantly his notes are always constructive and build on what I’m trying to create. If you want to take your work to the next level I suggest you go to Stuart
Absolutely spot on as usual. Thank you so much for all your helpful comments and suggestions. You have quite a knack for the craft.
You reinforced things I already knew, but also hit me with some new points to work on. Your note about the family dynamics was excellent.
Thanks a lot for the notes and suggestions. I agree with all you’ve said and will put them to use.
Stuart Foreman is a screenwriter, script consultant and script reader. He offers script coverage, script notes, and development notes of feature scripts and TV pilots at a reasonable fee.
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